LEARN;
- To use a correct sentence.
- To use interesting vocabulary
- My ideas are interesting.
Once there was a man who had it all rich fame family fans or you could say
to many fans his family was his greatest position even if he had lost the fame
and fans but he became old so he retired. To spend some quality time with his
family he older and became a grandfather, his children moved away but not
that far away his wife got sick but the children did not now until the sickness
got worse then the father told the children were all in shock they started to
visit everyday to check up on the mother and father until the day came when
she passed away, the father would always come to the grave with her
favourite flower and always wished that she could have had more time with
here but every time he goes he can feel here spirit saying that she fine and
wish she was with her but he got sick he went to hospital the children would
always stay with their children they always asked questions like are you fine
do you need anything, the only thing when would say i’m fine I just to be with
their mum until he passed and then when I came in the the new born then
that's when
they named
me after my grandpa Josaia.
to many fans his family was his greatest position even if he had lost the fame
and fans but he became old so he retired. To spend some quality time with his
family he older and became a grandfather, his children moved away but not
that far away his wife got sick but the children did not now until the sickness
got worse then the father told the children were all in shock they started to
visit everyday to check up on the mother and father until the day came when
she passed away, the father would always come to the grave with her
favourite flower and always wished that she could have had more time with
here but every time he goes he can feel here spirit saying that she fine and
wish she was with her but he got sick he went to hospital the children would
always stay with their children they always asked questions like are you fine
do you need anything, the only thing when would say i’m fine I just to be with
their mum until he passed and then when I came in the the new born then
that's when
they named
me after my grandpa Josaia.
I wrote 234 words.
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