I am a year 7 student at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the Te Wairua Pakiki 6 Learning Space and my teachers are Miss Nees-Kairua and Mrs Tui.
Friday, June 12, 2020
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This article is about Dan Carter joining the blues team for a battle against crusaders.
Hi Josaia, Its me Bridget From Yaldhurst Model School.(Rimu Class) I really like this blog post of yours, It has a lot of good information in it. I really like how you have laid this drawing out. Maybe next time you could say why you did this or maybe ask a question to get the viewers to engage. But other then that good job. Bridget
Kia ora! My name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to yaldhurst Model School!
WOW! Me and my class have been learning aot about the things going on in the world and in New Zealand !
I think that the triangle is a good way to break things down and making things easier to understand and work on. Why did you break these things down into those groupes? What was you favorite thing to learn about?
I love the colours btw :D Maybe to improve you could write a little more about this to give the reader more infomation BD Thanks!!!! Maddie :)
Hi there Josaia, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWOW! I really like the bright colours. I also like that the text is bold and easy to read.
This reminds me of a news website my class reads that shows lots of news, national or worldwide.
I noticed that you did an upside down triangle for your last post, so maybe next time you could do a different shape.
Who do you want to win?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hi Josaia,
ReplyDeleteIts me Bridget From Yaldhurst Model School.(Rimu Class) I really like this blog post of yours, It has a lot of good information in it. I really like how you have laid this drawing out. Maybe next time you could say why you did this or maybe ask a question to get the viewers to engage.
But other then that good job.
Bridget
Hello Josaia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you had a sort of diagram thing to display what kind of information goes into which category.
This reminds me of when I had a look at a news website and also when I had a news quiz in class.
To improve, maybe you could talk more about why you're blogging about this and if you all read about Dan Carter or if it was just you.
Why did you blog about this?
Cya later Josaia, keep it up!
-Amelia
Kia ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to yaldhurst Model School!
WOW!
Me and my class have been learning aot about the things going on in the world and in New Zealand !
I think that the triangle is a good way to break things down and making things easier to understand and work on. Why did you break these things down into those groupes? What was you favorite thing to learn about?
I love the colours btw :D
Maybe to improve you could write a little more about this to give the reader more infomation BD
Thanks!!!!
Maddie :)