Extoci trees aren't evil

We have been challenge with are extocis trees aren't evil. 

Planning 

Topic	Extocis aren’t evil
Position	Extocis aren’t evil
Reason 1	Some plants of the english  are herbs that could be used for medicine to help sickness.
Reason 2	Its listing season so birds are using some extocis trees are used for their nest.
Reason 3	By choping down extocis trees some of those trees are starting to become extinct

Writing

Intro	-States the topic and your position -Mentions your three main ideas	The goverment belive by choping down the extocis but some people belive thats wrong, I believe that's wrong to.I Some plants of the english  are herbs that could be used for medicine to help sickness.It's listing season so birds are using some extocis trees are used for their nest.By choping down extocis trees some of those trees are starting to become extinct.
Para 1	-States your first idea. -Explains the idea -Gives evidence or examples to support your idea.	Some of the english plants that got planted are herbs that are used for medicines to help with the flu, illness, wounds and swollen parts of some people's bodies so that it can help. Some of the english plant where herbs that helped the maroi but it was not free.  But now times have changed and the english and mario are friends know.
Para 2	-States your second idea. -Explains the idea -Gives evidence or examples to support your idea.	Some extoci tree’s are being used for birds nest because it nesting season and by cutting down some trees could really endargerbirds.  Like by cutting a few trees you could kill a few baby birds, few adult birds that could really be  birds going extinct like, a Kakapo before there wasn’t that much but know there is 211 living individual birds, know so you shouldn’t really take the risk or it.
Para 3	-States your third idea. -Explains the idea -Gives evidence or examples to support your idea.	By chopping down trees you should start worrying about those trees and starting to become extinct and new zealand could save those trees by more of those trees including their trees so they can help the planet and those trees and who knows other countries could start following along . and they might even plant our native trees so that's what people call a win win plus it will be safer future for their children.
Conc	Recaps your three main ideas and re states your position.	As some people know the are going to start chopping down trees but some of those trees are English herb that are used for medicines. And it is nesting season and some native New Zealand birds are going to make a nest in one of those trees and when you chopped down those trees you could kill a few of those native birds that could really damage the population so why take the risk when you could really save those birds life.If you cut down those trees  You could cut some trees that are going extinct and think if we didn’t cut down those trees we could plant more they met bring pest but they bring more native birds to New Zealand so and you could plant native trees  and exotic trees so your save those trees and ours.