I am a year 7 student at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in the Te Wairua Pakiki 6 Learning Space and my teachers are Miss Nees-Kairua and Mrs Tui.
Hi there Josaia! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Josaia! I love the clear explanation! It makes it easy for me to understand, and the pictures makes it more visually appealing!
I never knew how they made chocolate! The process is very interesting! I keep forgetting that chocolate starts off as some cocoa!
However, I noticed that some of the pictures were slightly odd in proportions. I think you may have made them a little too wide. That way, it makes it hard to read words on the pictures. And after that, perhaps you could make the pictures slot into each other. Like some sort of puzzle!
Hi there Josaia, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have all the steps in a clear easy to read way and have lots of pictures around it.
This reminds me of when I learnt a bit about this topic a while ago.
Next time you could change the background colour of the drawing, so then you can't see the checkered pattern.
What's your favourite chocolate flavour?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hi Josaia its Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI like chocolate. I like how all the steps are in there.
Next time you can make "chocolate making machine" bigger and the pictures smaller and put a background.
Kind regards
Michaela
Hi there Josaia! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Josaia! I love the clear explanation! It makes it easy for me to understand, and the pictures makes it more visually appealing!
I never knew how they made chocolate! The process is very interesting! I keep forgetting that chocolate starts off as some cocoa!
However, I noticed that some of the pictures were slightly odd in proportions. I think you may have made them a little too wide. That way, it makes it hard to read words on the pictures. And after that, perhaps you could make the pictures slot into each other. Like some sort of puzzle!
Keep up the awesome blogging Josaia!
From Hana!